Mike Bibby

Monday, May 01, 2006

Should sports classes be sacrificed in high schools so students can concentrate on academic subjects?

It is not quite approiate that the sport class should be sacrificed in high school. Not only the study in the school, but also the students should also focus on the sport. If there was no physical educational class (PE) in their school life, it is possible that the students might feel disappointed if there are no sport classes in high schools.

Why do people come up with this issue? First, in my opinion, maybe some of the children foucs on the sports too much and ignore the study. Therefore, children's parents think that the study of their children is much important than the sport. They issue this problem to the school and decide to hope the school can sacrifice the sport class in high schools. Second, to tell the truth, if I were the student from high school, I would not agree this issue. If the students do not have any activities except for the studies in the school, it might harm to them. The purpose of having the sport class is that students can release their pressure by doing the exercise. If this issue is agreed, there were no opportunities for the students exercising except for weekends.
Sport class might be one of important part of the high school because some of the students would like to be an athlete, therefore, students make good use of the opportunities to train their skills.

On the other hand, if the school has the sport class, students can liberate their pressure by attending the sport class. From this point, it is good for them to have the class. Although it has advantages and disadvantagesof having the sport class, in my opinion, it is not the time to abolish the sport class in high schools.

1 Comments:

  • Not only the study in the school, but also the students should also focus on the sport.
    -->sentence structure


    If there was no physical educational class (PE) in their school life, it is possible that the students might feel disappointed if there are no sport classes in high schools.
    -->delete one of the if clauses.



    1. Hi Bibby
    You have all the ideas and reasons why it should not be sacrificed, now you have to organize them in order. Start your frist paragraph with an clarification of the question. Then make your argument in the second paragraph with pros and cons.


    I would not promise this issue.
    -->? promise? (word choice)

    harm for them-->harmful to them

    some of the students would like to be an athlete-->(plural)

    2. All the main arguments are done in the second paragraph. In your final paragraph, summarise your main points and add your final words.

    By Blogger Yuhsiuwriting, at 8:46 PM  

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